Descriptive writing

I have done some descriptive writing and I think I have done it well.

I felt really cold that I shivered all over the body, my feet and my arms. I felt like I was a Yeti in the cold!. I can smell the cold fresh morning breeze in my nostrils. I can hear all the ice crush when I am stepping in the ice cold grass. I could see the sun but it was still freezing. I felt like I was about to die. The trees are surrounding me like a wall.