Friday 9 September 2016

writing reflection T3 W7

This week i have done an explanation about how a nail clipper works I have done a short video about it. I felt a bit nervous about recording myself and i have worked on this for two weeks here is the video

And Here is the link to the whole document

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Kristian. I like how your voice was clear in the recording. Next time you could work on the background noise in the recording. This reminds me of when I was doing my household item recording. Why did you choose to do nail clippers for your household item?

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  2. Buna dimineata Kristian. This video was amazing. I love you you are talking clearly. But you can hear the wind in the background. Maybe fix that up and this would be a perfect video. This reminds me about my recording on that too! Why did you choose to record outside?
    Thanks

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