I have done some descriptive writing and I think I have done it well.
I felt really cold that I shivered all over the body, my feet and my arms. I felt like I was a Yeti in the cold!. I can smell the cold fresh morning breeze in my nostrils. I can hear all the ice crush when I am stepping in the ice cold grass. I could see the sun but it was still freezing. I felt like I was about to die. The trees are surrounding me like a wall.
Hello Kristian,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece of descriptive writing, but where is the image so people know what your writing about! Do you think that maybe next time you could right a little more!
I also really like that you have usen descriptive words like shivered, breeze, ice cold ect!
What is your favourite piece of your writing?
He whetu koe! (Your a star!)
Katelynn (Totara 2, Grey Main School)